Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house/ flat. Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter • explain the reasons for the noise • apologise • describe what action you will take

#neighbours #noise #house #apologise #action

✨ Do you want to improve your IELTS writing?

Dear All, Hope you are doing good. I am extremely sorry for the loud noise from my apartment recently which had caused a huge disturbance in the environment. My friends from Spain have come here temporarily to attend a fall course in NY. They have enrolled in Music and Dance courses and have practice sessions at home late

night

Change preposition

at night

show examples

after their class schedule in the morning. That's the major reason for the noise and the disturbances you experienced recently. I totally understand your difficulties and frustrations with

this

issue and have communicated

about

Change preposition

apply

show examples

it to my friends. I have requested to change their class schedule to accommodate practise sessions during

day time

Correct your spelling

daytime

show examples

. I have

also

placed some heavy carpets on the floor and asked them to practise in the garage to reduce the impact. I am really sorry for all the inconvenience that you are facing due to

this

issue. I ensure everyone that it will be resolved soon and everyone will enjoy a peaceful environment. Regards, Sarah.

Submitted by santa.dec90 on Thu Nov 05 2020

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

2
Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
3
Grammar mistakes
detected issues

0123456789.0505

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

168 words

🚀 Prepare for IELTS writing section today!

Unlimited Task 1 & Task 2 checks
Practice with essays, charts, and letters.
Personalized suggestions & mistake analysis
Spot every mistake and boost your score.
Topic ideas & vocabulary helpers
Expand your ideas and use the right words.
Progress tracking
Watch your writing improve with every practice.

What to do next:

Look at other essays:

5
band
The availability of entertainment such as video games on handheld devices is harmful to individuals and to the society they live in. To what extent do you agree and disagree?
In this digitalized era many people and children tend to use modern gadgets for entertainment purposes. It is widely believed that usage of these devices for video games, accessing social media, and watching movies have detrimental impacts than metis to humans and to the society. I completely agree with this statement as there are health issues, limited social interactions as a result of over usage screens even though there are some advantages such as cheap and easily accessible entertainment for everyone. This essay will discuss the merits and issues of modern devices and provide my own opinion.
<4
band
Scientists predict in the near future, cars will be driven by computers, not people. Why? Do you think it is a positive or negative development?
Boon of technology has changed the lifestyle of human beings with ample of convenient inovations. scientists imagine that in upcoming decades cars will be driven with artificial technology. Although, it has many benefits we can not ignore its disadvantages and my viewpoints about these will be written in forthcoming paragraphs.
4.5
band
The nuclear family is well adapted to moving due to its size. Do you think children benefit in any way from moving? Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?
A small family always finds it convenient to move from one place to another owing to a few members in a family. The children will have a completely diverse exposure to culture and citizens from a new place. I would like to take middle view.
5.5
band
As the internet becomes more popular, newspapers are becoming a thing of the past. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge and experience. Write at least 250 words.
Nowadays, it is obvious that internet plays crucial role in humans' everyday lives. Some people argue the internet has increasingly gained its popularity and that the newspapers will be outdated. Personally, I agree with the statement since there are uncountable benefits that the internet could bring about. In the following paragraphs, the details will be elaborated before the conclusion is reached.
4
band
The developments in Happy valley shopping center from 1982 to 2012 is represent by maps
The images illustrate detailed information about how the Happy Valley shopping centre developed in the space of three decades.

Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house/ flat. Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter • explain the reasons for the noise • apologise • describe what action you will take

The availability of entertainment such as video games on handheld devices is harmful to individuals and to the society they live in. To what extent do you agree and disagree?

Scientists predict in the near future, cars will be driven by computers, not people. Why? Do you think it is a positive or negative development?

The nuclear family is well adapted to moving due to its size. Do you think children benefit in any way from moving? Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

As the internet becomes more popular, newspapers are becoming a thing of the past. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge and experience. Write at least 250 words.

The developments in Happy valley shopping center from 1982 to 2012 is represent by maps