Universities should accept equal numbers of male and female students in every subject. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience

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Universities are the places where we acquire knowledge and decide our career. Post graduations are very important for students and society as well. In any department,
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classrooms and research centres
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the world. They offer different courses in various streams, where the number of students
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to study irrespective of gender. Some universities restrict the number of female students in some courses, I,
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, completely disagree with
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trend and I will explain why in
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essay with some examples. Today, women are competing with men in every field. Aeronautics to politics they are thriving more than before and they are leaving their mark in those fields.
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universities, the
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of knowledge, they are giving equal opportunities for men and women in some subjects. If universities are not allowing women,
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there will be very less balance in that particular field. All working places should be balanced with an equal number of men and women,
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there will be tremendous growth in that field. A lot of people
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opine that like mechanical engineering, some courses or fields are not suitable for women. Is really women are not suitable for certain courses? Absolutely not.
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Motor Mechanics
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is less popular among girls.
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is not given seats to girls in that
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, showing demand for physical work in that
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is a reason. One girl convinced the head of the department and not only joined in that
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topped in the final examinations. Later, the
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started allowing girls in that
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. To conclude, if that girl would not take a step to achieve her dreams,
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niversity would never be given equal opportunities to both genders. Luckily,
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discrimination in the is not so popular now a day.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • gender diversity
  • fostering innovation
  • educational experience
  • enforcing gender quotas
  • merit and potential
  • individual achievements
  • natural differences
  • gender equality
  • reducing gender stereotypes
  • balanced workforce
  • traditionally male-dominated or female-dominated fields
  • fluctuating applicant numbers
  • compromise on quality
  • diversity aspects
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