In today's competitive world, many families find it necessary for both parents to go out to work. While some say the children in these families benefit from the additional income, others feel they lack support because of their parents' absence. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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decades. Nowadays, there is more common to see families where

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parents work in order to boost

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amily's budget.

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new family's trend could

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children's development and brings several

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in their personality without a strong foundation of family support. In my view, I think that parents should

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the balance between having a

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careers and spending family-time and

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they have to decide the family values.

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, it is more important

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e worthy or be happy. In a consumerism society, more people are obsessive to have largest accounts bank, material

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, and boost the family's incomes. The defend of

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parent's behaviour is they could

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a worthy environment of their family members and economic matters

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not

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in any aspects of their life. Psychologists claim that

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common behaviour on parents who were suffered financial problems in their childhood. Their experimented some frustrations related to living without access

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education, health, or entertainment.

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kind of parents grow up, they tended to put all their life expectations and dreamers on their new family. Thinking that their children will have all the things that he could not enjoy when was a child. When both parents are employees

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and involve the majority of time working, they missed the crucial opportunity to build strong bonds with their children. Childhood is the paramount stage of every human being because children are developing their personality and dealing with personal knowledge in

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stage. The

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report of Young Adult Care magazine shows that young people who

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not have the opportunity of building strong relationships with their siblings or families

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more predictable to

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in vandalism and addictions behaviours

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as drugs or alcohol because they do not have family support or a closed model to follow. In conclusion, it is important that parents be concerned about

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inancial situation and try to ensure a qualified environment of their children for the future.

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, creating bonds, teaching values and being part of their children's development

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is the main purpose of having a family.