In some countries an increasing number of people are suffering from health problems as a result of eating too much fast food. It is therefore necessary for government to impose a higher tax on this kind of food. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement.
In certain countries, most
of
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p
eople face Add an article
the
to
health issues because they are consuming too much fast Verify preposition usage
apply
food
. In Use synonyms
this
way, if governments want to minimise these problems, they need to apply a higher Linking Words
tax
on Use synonyms
this
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kind
of Use synonyms
food
. According to Use synonyms
this
statement, Linking Words
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igh Add an article
the
tax
of fast Use synonyms
food
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to
more chaos than benefits for people. That's whyVerify preposition usage
apply
,
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apply
tottally
disagree with Correct your spelling
totally
this
statement for some reasons.
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d
oubt, eating fast Add an article
a
food
and junk Use synonyms
food
are the most common dietary habit in the world. There are a lot of Use synonyms
fast
Add a hyphen
fast-food
food
chains and brands,Use synonyms
furthermore
, these are one of the economical advantages for the Linking Words
countires
. Correct your spelling
countries
country
This
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kind
of restaurants Use synonyms
are
everywhere because they are cheaper than the other fancy restaurant. They Change the verb form
is
also
have many options which are wide and delicious. In Linking Words
this
way, they can appeal to all people, from wealthy to destitute. Especially, fast Linking Words
food
is a Use synonyms
kind
of treasure for poor people according to prices. For Use synonyms
this
reason, if Linking Words
g
overnment impose a higher Add an article
the
tax
on fast Use synonyms
food
, most Use synonyms
of
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apply
p
oor people may die because of starving. Add an article
the
Hence
it will be Linking Words
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ore complicated and more inhumane problem for the government than Add an article
a
healthy
issues. Replace the word
health
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type of sanction for Linking Words
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ecrease to Add an article
a
the
consuming
Replace the word
consumption
of
fast Verify preposition usage
apply
food
may Use synonyms
does
not affect to wealthy people. They may choose eating fast Change the verb form
do
food
more expensive way or eat healthy foods which are priceless. Use synonyms
However
, poor people do not have a chance, they will suffer to survive if higher Linking Words
tax
will come.
The other thing is Use synonyms
e
conomical issues of the countries. Fast Add an article
the
food
's sector has Use synonyms
b
ig role Add an article
a
on
the countries income. Most Verify preposition usage
in
of
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apply
p
eople live for Add an article
the
the
eating fast Remove the article
apply
food
in the world. It is Use synonyms
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k
ind of addiction and people want to more and more. That's why, Add an article
a
in
every Verify preposition usage
apply
day
, a new fast Use synonyms
food
restaurant is open. It is mean, in every Use synonyms
day
, some Use synonyms
unemployee
people find a job which is in Correct your spelling
unemployed
f
ast Add an article
a
food
restaurant. So, if governments apply a higher Use synonyms
tax
on Use synonyms
this
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kind
of Use synonyms
food
, a lot of people Use synonyms
Correct your spelling
lose
loose
their job consequences of decrease fast Replace the word
lose
food
consume. One more time, it could be Use synonyms
Correct your spelling
bigger
Add an article
a
biger
society problem than the health issues for the governments.
To sum up, apply a higher Change the word
bigger
tax
on fast Use synonyms
food
may help to society Use synonyms
for
decrease obesity, heart attacks or Verify preposition usage
to
diabets
. Correct your spelling
diabetes
However
, it Linking Words
also
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cause
to massacre and increase of Change the verb form
causes
unemployee
people Correct your spelling
unemployed
day
by Use synonyms
day
. For Use synonyms
this
reason, Linking Words
g
overnment should try to find Add an article
the
another
solutions Change the determiner
other
for
Verify preposition usage
to
prevent
these type of health issues.Change the verb form
preventing
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