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Some people believe that one-on-one lessons are better for learning while others think that group lessons are superior. discuss both views and give your own opinion

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No doubt
that is
 has been becoming a topic of discussion these days whether to study individually or in a team.
However
, the chunk of folks considers that personal lessons are good for shy people, others think that it is good to having lessons in a group to discover various thoughts on a topic. I personally believe that learning with a group of students will help to boost knowledge on a particular subject.
This
 essay will discuss both sides.
To begin
 with, it is an important fact that learners who feel uncomfortable to ask questions in front of their classmates can take advantage of individual classes. They will clear their doubts without any hesitation.
For instance
, a child who is of shy nature and always prefers to stay silent in the
class
 will take benefits from his personal tuition
class
, where he can ask anything openly to his tutor and the tutor will
also
 help him to increase the confidence level.
On the other hand
,
class
 discussions are always beneficial to discuss a topic from different angles. As everyone has their own thoughts about a particular thing and
as a result
, all can enhance their knowledge by working in a
class
. To exemplify,
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