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Some people think it would be a good idea for schools to teach every young person how to be a good parent. Do you agree or disagree with this opinion? Describe the skills a person needs to be a good parent.

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Educational institutions are made to help young people to develop their social skills as well as prepare them for
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professional life. Some individuals argue that schools should
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ow to be good at parenthood. I totally refuse the idea of schools discussing parenting role models with kids as both schools and teachers have no preparation to do that. Schools and teachers do not have enough psychological abilities to tell children what to do to become a good father/mother. Most
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eachers learn how to help students on specific subjects
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 as math, science, geography, literature.
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 means that they are skilled in general knowledge necessary for kids’ intellectual development. If students receive information regarding the best parenthood practices, they may disagree with some of their parents’ attitudes or decisions.
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, it would lead them to initiate a problem
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 families’ relationship.
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, the learning of good parenting skills
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 as to be lovely, friendship, emotional support, availability, and care could cause an undesired emotional connection between a child and a teacher.
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, educators have not the same customs as students’ families. By saying that, an attempt of interfering in students and parents’ life may cause
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damage on families’ traditions and beliefs. Some families have their way
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 their children based on their beliefs.
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, if an outside person
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 that some tradition is not good or is not right, the child can be confused and disrespect their parents. In conclusion, I disagree that schools should educate students on parenting good practices.
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, if school try to educate kids about important skills on how to be a good parent,
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 can lead children to unexpected relationships with their teachers.
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