IELTS Writing Correction Service
Writing Samples
Band 6.5

Nowadays people waste a lot of food that was bought from shops and restaurants. Why do you think people waste food? What can be done to reduce the amount of food they throw away?

#people #waste #food #shops #restaurants #amount
✨ Do you want to improve your IELTS writing?
In the 21st century majority of people throw away plenty of
food
Use synonyms
 which was bought or ordered in the stores and cafes.
This
Linking Words
 essay will suggest the reasons as well as the solution of
food
Use synonyms
 wasting. The main reasons for wasting a huge amount of
food
Use synonyms
 by people are that many people do not realize how much
food
Use synonyms
 they threw away and how it impacts the environment. Unfortunately, there is a very limited amount of information on the web about negative outcomes of throwing away
food
Use synonyms
such
Linking Words
 as desertification, global warming etc. By doing so, ordinary people even do not know about the existence of
this
Linking Words
 issue.
For example
Linking Words
, a survey in the research of the University of Cambridge students showed that most of the respondents are not aware of how much
food
Use synonyms
 they throw away every day and even they said that "it does not bother them". A possible solution to
this
Linking Words
 problem could be a growing awareness of people about the problem as
food
Use synonyms
 wasting. In order to do it, most viewed TV channels and shows ought to propagandize to viewers bad consequences of throwing away
food
Use synonyms
 items.
Food
Use synonyms
 producers
also
Linking Words
 have a part to play. Fast-
food
Use synonyms
 giants like McDonald's, KFC and etc should add illustrations of possible bad outcomes in the packages of
this
Linking Words
 issue with an eye to directly inform consumers.
For instance
Linking Words
, the Kazakhstan government to solve the consequences of smoking cigarettes by residents oblige cigarette producers to put images of illnesses which
then
Linking Words
 decreased several times the number of smokers. To conclude, nowadays people are not aware of the amount of
food
Use synonyms
 they waste and what effect on Earth does it have. In order to solve
this
Linking Words
 problem, TV programmes, shows and
food
Use synonyms
 producers itself ought to give information about future problems which may be caused because of
food
Use synonyms
 wasting.
Submitted by carinalewis.cl on

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Your opinion

Don’t put your opinion unless you are asked to give it.

If the question asks what you think, you MUST give your opinion to get a good score.

Don’t leave your opinion until the conclusion.

Here are examples of instructions that require you to give your opinion:

...do you agree or disagree?...do you think...?...your opinion...?

Discover more tips in The Ultimate Guide to Get a Target Band Score of 7+ »— a book that's free for 🚀 Premium users.

What to do next:
Look at other essays: