stress-related illnesses are becoming increasingly common. what do you think are the causes of this? what solutions can you suggest?

As everyone knows, these days, the competition becomes higher and higher so, it is inevitable that people should adapt themselves unless they could not have the better well-being, and

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could lead to the increasing of stress in modern people.

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and foremost, as I have mentioned, it becomes normal in nowadays that the competition is really high; in fact,

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event not only occurred in most of the job but

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in the school as well. So, for now , both adults and children could encounter

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situation.

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has not been solve as soon as possible, it could result in either physically and mentally effects.

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, headaches, lowing energy or feeling depressed.

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could be work out for several ideas which are exercising, eating healthy food, and having sufficient sleep. Indeed, for the people that have serious stress, those activities could be really hard for them to do.

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, people around them could be another factor that can help them to fight with

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bad situation.

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, going out to exercise with them, bringing them to do other activities, or talking to them and try to make them happy. To sum up, nowadays, everyone could face a stress

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because of many factors, and

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could lead to many negative consequences.

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, if they knew how to take care of themselves, and people around them always support, they could avoid

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as soon as possible.

fahsai

Nov 7, 2020

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hypertension
anxiety
depression
modern lifestyle
work pressure
technological advancements
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