In the future, nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement.

Years to come, everybody will have free access to read all information
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internet
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nternet has made online reading easier n faster, some people still prefer to buy printed materials to read.l totally disagree with
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topic because of distraction and lack of finance.
Firstly
,there are distractions associated with online reading.During studying using the
internet
, there is every possibility of replying to messages sent via email or surfing the
internet
thereby shifting attention away.
for instance
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recent research conducted among undergraduates in
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niversity of
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, Nigeria showed that 70% of students lost concentration while reading either with the
use
of computers or phones.
Hence
, online reading does not permit absolute concentration.
In addition
,due to lack of finance,some people cannot afford to purchase phones and computers talkless of being able to pay for
internet
subscription especially in developing countries like Nigeria where the rate of poverty is on the increase.For people living in
such
places to have access to information,they need to read printed journals to keep themselves updated with current events happening globally.
For example
,80% of people that visit vendors pay
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ittle amount of money and sit down to read newspapers because they cannot afford to buy and take home to study at a convenient time.
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ajority do not have money
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buy data for browsing.
Furthermore
, reading online has health implications.Excessive light rays entering the eye while using computer cause eye problems.To illustrate,a current survey carried out among patients that visited
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niversity of
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teaching hospital has shown that 70% of people with sight disorder spend a lot of time on the
internet
.
Also
, elderly people have limited knowledge
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omputer, so they prefer buying journals to read. In conclusion, even though the
use
of the
internet
has made studying easier in the sense that people have access to almost all information,l believe that in the future, people will always prefer buying printed books and magazines to read because not everyone is computer literate.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • accessibility
  • convenience
  • cost-effective
  • cultural value
  • sentimental value
  • reliability
  • distracting
  • access to
  • digital devices
  • internet
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