It is more important to use the space in cities well than make them look beautiful. To what extent do you agree.

These days, cities are experiencing an unprecedented increase in size and population. Young people tend to want to live in urban areas due to
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facilities. Along with the big volume of influx into capitals
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the scarcity of space gives a concern. While some are of the opinion that utilizing most of the area under construction is more important than the beauty of appearance, I would discuss that both are important and none of them is superior.
To begin
with, the primary factor is the population that needs to be accommodated.
Therefore
, it is important the architects take into consideration that layout a functional floor plan. recently, most interior designers try to develop the idea of bachelor apartments for who lives sole or with a partner and it limited to the minimum slot and there is no more extra zone.
Moreover
, taking into consideration who will live in the space is important, having upstairs laundry, building mudroom for families and custom-made storage are some brilliant ideas to make them more effective.
However
, the exterior space, Façade of buildings and urban design are important factors that cannot be ignored. Having enough parking lot for the residential houses and commercial building, decent hospitals and schools are points that should be investigated along with interiors design. To accentuate those points,
for instance
, consider parents who want to drop off kids at school in the rush hours. Those consideration secure safety of society.
Moreover
, the feature of cities including the exterior of the buildings and cultural sites can be appealing to tourists and incentivize them to visit. It can be a good source of income and create a sort of career for dwellers and improve societies’ economic. Inconclusion, to resolve the shortage of living capacity in cities should be assigned to sophisticated designers and architects to create practical buildings, indeed we need to pay enough attention into the urban design in terms of residences’ needs and attraction. That may ensure wellbeing society and bring some job opportunity to attracting more visitors.
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