In spite of the advances made in agriculture, many people around the world still go hungry. Why is this the case? What can be done about this problem?

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Nowadays more and more people around the world go hungry in spite of the advances made in agriculture.
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, in recent years, new methods and technique of farming are been developed. These new technologies could provide more
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compared to traditional farming methods.
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, the major problem is caused by the large scale distribution
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responsible for wasting huge quantities of
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Europe, nearly 30% of all
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that enters the distribution chain will be wasted.
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situation could lead to enormous environmental problems, as all the effort to pack, process and transport that
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was wasted.
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, poor countries don't have the means to create these new technologies and they rely on old farming methods.
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, a new farming technique could produce 500% more
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compared to old farming means.
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, Governments should act with severe measures in order to tackle
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problem, they should promulgate laws and regulation that limits
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waste.
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, they should cooperate with poorest countries in order to guarantee everyone a meal. A good example could be a company that was founded in my city, their mission is to reduce the
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wasted by creating a market that gives for
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ree meal close to the expiration date. By doing so they reduced the
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waste in my city to just 2% compared to 25% before. To sum up, it would be advisable that both governments and people start to search for new solutions that could solve
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, we need to study more and develop new technologies that could improve our way of breeding or farming in order to create more
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for the inhabitants of our planet.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • inequality
  • distribution
  • access to resources
  • climate change
  • natural disasters
  • political factors
  • economic factors
  • agricultural practices
  • infrastructure
  • transportation
  • population growth
  • education
  • knowledge
  • food waste
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