In many societies in the world, the population is ageing rapidly and this is leading to an unsustainable increase in the cost of public healthcare. A nation’s population should pay for their healthcare provision in the future. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

The

cost

Use synonyms

of public

healthcare

Use synonyms

has grown due to a quick increase in

the

Remove the article

apply

show examples

elderly people in many different cultures. Some people believe that the future

cost

Use synonyms

of it should be paid by the citizens

instead

Linking Words

of the governments.

This

Linking Words

essay agrees that the population should

paid

Change the verb form

be paid

pay

show examples

for the future treatments so the many spent on them before would be used on younger generations care.

Firstly

Linking Words

, the fact that the population is ageing is a good sign of the improvements made in the caring system and a change in the lifestyle so people don’t die at younger ages as in the old times.

However

Linking Words

,

this

Linking Words

has created a misbalance on the

cost

Use synonyms

of

the

Remove the article

apply

show examples

public

healthcare

Use synonyms

and left many young generations without the possibility to get important treatments they need.

For instance

Linking Words

, in China

Add a comma

,

show examples

the governments announced in 2010 that many cancer treatments will no longer be a public service due to an over

cost

Use synonyms

generated by the elderlies.

Secondly

Linking Words

, some societies are overpopulated and it would be impossible for the governments both to pay for a range amount of services and to pay for every age group. For

this

Linking Words

reason, nations should make a research to see after which age the

cost

Use synonyms

of

healthcare

Use synonyms

increases and so they can make them pay the 75% of the

cost

Use synonyms

of the used services in the future times.

As a result

Linking Words

, the money would be spent in younger generations important treatments. In my opinion,

although

Linking Words

I think it’s unfair to make people pay for their own treatments I believe it is the best option to keep the sustainability of the care system

besides

Linking Words

of to

keeping

Change the form of the verb

keep

show examples

the population away of dying soon. To conclude, the nations should make policies so the aged groups pay for the 75% of the services as

this

Linking Words

will help to maintain

a

Remove the article

apply

show examples

sustainable

healthcare

Use synonyms

apart from not leaving people

d

Add the particle

to

show examples

ie at younger ages.