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Some people think that qualities a person needs to become a successful in today's world cannot be learned at university To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Nowadays, many people have an opportunity to
study
 at
a
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university
. Some people believe that only learning at the
university
 cannot make people access success in today's world. In
this
 essay, I will consider both sides of the argument and give my own point of view. On one hand, there are many occupations that need specific
knowledge
 which is learned from universities,
such
 as a doctor, nurses and so on.
For example
, in my country, to become a doctor, students need to
study
 6 years with 4 years in class to learn theory and 2 years
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practical lessons.
As a result
, after they pass the examination, they become a doctor.
Moreover
, the same situation
on
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 studying nurse. Student needs to
study
 for 4 years at the
university
 and they
also
 need to take both practical lessons and theory lessons.
This
 is because they need specific
knowledge
 to achieve their own career.
On the other hand
, there are
also
 some occupations that do not need to learn at the
university
 to gain the achievement. The best example is the
business man
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. Experience is more essential rather than
knowledge
.
This
 is because that experience is hard to learn from institutions. They must gain experience
by
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 hand-on practice.
In addition
, some skilled workers
also
 just need to learn from pre-vocational school.
This
 is because
this
 kind of school is more focus on technology which can help them to succeed in their career.
Consequently
, they
success
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 in their own field. In conclusion,
although
 there are many people who make a success need to
study
 at the
university
 because they can learn the specific
knowledge
 which they need.
However
, I strongly believe that there are
also
 many people who gain successful do not need to learn from a
university
 because experience and skill are more necessary, just depends on different people what they need to achieve their goal.
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