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Topic : Some people think that environmental problems are too big for individuals to solve. Others believe that individuals also can do some things to solve these problems. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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Many think that it's not an individual work to solve environmental program as it's too big for them, while others argue that every individual when work on some environmental program
then
 everything issue can be resolved.
This
 essay will discuss both the views.
To begin
 with, there are many environmental issues in which a single person contribution will definitely have no impact.
For instance
, air, water and noise pollution. Let's talk about air pollution, as we all know that
this
 pollution is increasing day by day due to increase in carbon in the atmosphere. If as an individual one person is stopping to use his or her own vehicle and travels in a means of public transport,
then
 that will not make the air clean.
Thus
, the environment is a bigger scope and only single citizen effort will have no power to resolve.
On the other hand
, there is a certain point with regards to the environment where the contribution of even a mall amount will make a huge impact.
For example
, the matter of population. An individual can very well have the power to control
this
 matter.
Instead
 of giving birth, a couple can have a choice to adopt so many children from an orphanage. By doing so, the increasing population can be controlled as well as a kid will get a new and better life. It's true that a single human contribution will not have a great change in the environment.
However
, there are areas where even a small step taken by one citizen will improve society.
Hence
, in my opinion, I believe that even a mall input from one person can make a huge difference in the long run.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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