In some areas of the US, a curfew is imposed, in which teenagers are not allowed to be out of doors after a particular time at night unless they are accompanied by an adult. What is your opinion about the law

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rules, it is not forbidden walking with an adult who is able to control them. I believe the mentioned measure allows reduce the rate of incidents or vandalism acts, mainly in dangerous areas in the United States. Unfortunately, crimes are growing during the

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oung population. It is well-known drugs consumption since an early age has increased the number of disturbs particularly at night when they are not under adults supervision. For that reason, I believe the most relevant issue in society is the spreading of the above mention addiction in young generations. I am strongly convinced adults often are not able to control their kids, so,

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go out without a responsible adult.

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Prediction or recommendation

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To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

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In conclusion
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Finally
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

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In some areas of the US, a curfew is imposed, in which teenagers are not allowed to be out of doors after a particular time at night unless they are accompanied by an adult. What is your opinion about the law

Include an introduction and conclusion

Essentional vocabulary list for IELTS Writing 7+

Nowadays many people choose to be self-employed, rather than to work for a company or organisation. Why might this be the case? What could be the disadvantages of being self-employed?

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Some people believe unpaid community service should be a compulsory part of high schol programmes (for example working for a charity, improving the neighborhood or teaching sports to younger children). To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Foreign visitors should pay more than local visitors for cultural and historical attractions. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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