In some areas of the US, a curfew is imposed, in which teenagers are not allowed to be out of doors after a particular time at night unless they are accompanied by an adult. What is your opinion about the law

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In some states in North America, local governments regulate the

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rules, it is not forbidden walking with an adult who is able to control them. I believe the mentioned measure allows reduce the rate of incidents or vandalism acts, mainly in dangerous areas in the United States. Unfortunately, crimes are growing during the

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oung population. It is well-known drugs consumption since an early age has increased the number of disturbs particularly at night when they are not under adults supervision. For that reason, I believe the most relevant issue in society is the spreading of the above mention addiction in young generations. I am strongly convinced adults often are not able to control their kids, so,

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go out without a responsible adult.

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Summary
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Prediction or recommendation

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To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

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In conclusion
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Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

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potentially dangerous situations
fosters
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community standards
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infringe
personal freedom
law enforcement
breed resentment
root causes
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In some areas of the US, a curfew is imposed, in which teenagers are not allowed to be out of doors after a particular time at night unless they are accompanied by an adult. What is your opinion about the law

Include an introduction and conclusion

Young people are often influenced in their behaviours and situations by others in the same age. This is called “peer pressure”. Do the disadvantages of peer pressure outweigh the advantages?

Some people think the government funding should not be used for supporting art and culture, others think supporting cultural activities may be beneficial for the population and the culture. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Some people think it is more important to spend money on roads and motorways than on public transport systems. To what extend do you agree?