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In some cultures, older people are valued most highly. In other cultures, youth is valued more. Discuss both views and give your opinion as to which age should be most valued.

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It is true that respecting old people is valuable in some cultures, while some cultures tend towards the viewpoint that teenagers should be more respected. I would have to support the idea that respecting is depending on the personality neither on ages. On the one hand, there are clear arguments that older people should
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 most highly. One of the main reasons can be that treating old ages has to be more careful and formal.
This
 is because old people reached the age of
sensetive
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sensitive
 feelings and harmful health.
For instance
, treating your grandparents must be very respectful, and jokes, funny stories, loud voices and laughing must be prohibited while treating them.
Thus
, there have to be
a strong limitations
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 to old people.
On the other hand
, it is
also
 possible to make the opposing case. It is often argued in some cultures that youths
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 valued more. The major reason behind
this
 is to teach teenagers some ethics, good behaviour and
ethincal
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ethical
 attitudes, which will result in a new mature generation in
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 and having a great future. A
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 good example here is that some countries provide events and establish schools which are teaching behaviours to young ages.
Therefore
, the youths gain the ability to be respected and lead them toward treating people
otherwise
. In conclusion, while people may vary in their opinion, I think that age is not the criteria
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 conducting people .
As a result
, the whole society
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 each other despite the ages.
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