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What Is Global Warming Crisis? - A Global Warming Solution

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With the increase in population in all over the world need of new land for habitat has been increased as results rise in air
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,water
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 and noise
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 has been observed which ultimately results in global warming. Global warming means
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ise in earth temperature due to the increase in greenhouse gases
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 as carbondiaoxised,carbon monoxide, nitrogen oxide and methane by human activities of deforestation and the use of fossil fuel burn and overpopulation population . During
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ast few decades it has been observed that global warming has increased and it causes its bad effect on earth atmosphere and climate changes hotter area is becoming hotter as
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emperature is rising . dryer area becoming drier and wet area becoming wetter water due to more rainfalls. There are many things which contributing global warming but most important is overpopulation population and
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 due to fossil fuel burning To overcome the problems one should control over the use of fossil energy .more and more stress will be given on to use of renewable energy and solar energy. overpopulation society can be controlled, deforestation can be stopped planting more and more trees, making awareness in people world level conference and orgationation should become forward just to make awareness about it.
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