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Some people think that parents should teach their children how to be good members of society. Others, however, believe that school is the best place to learn this. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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The diagram reveals, the development of a public
park
, which opened in 1992 and the same
park
today
. Overall, it can be seen that the huge development took place over the period, which change the whole plan of the
park
today
 as compared to 1920. It is important to note that the
park
 had three rose gardens in 1920 but, now it has only two rose gardens. One of them is located at the centre of the
park
, which replaced the fountain of 1920. In 1920, it had a pond for water plants,
however
, it is now converted into children's play area.
On the other hand
, the entrances of the
park
 not changed with the years, they remained the same. In the case of
today
's
park
, cafe' swaps rose
garden
.
Also
, there are seats at the perimeter of the central rose
garden
. There is a big amphitheatre for concerts, which located near the rose
garden
. It replaced the stage for musicians of 1920.
Moreover
, in 1920, the
park
 had a small glasshouse near the entrance of Eldon street, whereas it swapped by the water feature. There is an entrance for an underground car
park
 at the one corner of
today
's
park
, which was not in 1920. The
park
 had more seating facilities in 1920 than
today
. The seats spread all around the
park
 in 1920,
instead
 of seats at the rose
garden
 in
today
's
park
.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • good members of society
  • teach
  • parents
  • schools
  • responsibility
  • values
  • respect
  • empathy
  • responsibility
  • formal education
  • citizenship
  • ethics
  • social responsibility
  • lead by example
  • role models
  • conducive environment
  • extracurricular activities
  • community involvement
  • collaborate
  • holistic approach
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