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Nowadays anyone can use a mobile phone to answer work and personal calls at any place or 7 days a week. Does it have more positive or negative effects on individuals and society?

In the modern fast-pacing world, people are able to be contacted by
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almost 24 hours a day. While
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 tendency may cause
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exhaustion as well as other
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 issues, I am convinced that it mostly brings convenience to a person and unites a
society
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. On the one hand, answering calls anytime and anywhere may be a key
factor
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 of a person's severe exhaustion and cause global
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 problems. Being in contact around the clock means that an individual may be disturbed even during a vacation or at midnight which may lower one’s energy level due to lack of sleep or rest.
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,
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 might be a crucial element in developing various
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 issues, namely insomnia or anxiety when a person is constantly disturbed.
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, it might lead to an informational overload in
society
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 globally as well as be a cause of psychological disorders.
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, Japanese workers are known for their workaholic attitude which is expressed in constantly answering their
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 or checking their mail.
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 mostly costs those workers their
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 and even might lead to suicides due to the lack of rest and
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ossibility to relax.
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, the ability to be always in touch through a
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 could help to react faster to any emergency as well as to organize a big group of people. Having a smartphone gives an opportunity to contact a family member or a co-worker in case of any problem at home or workplace and find an urgent solution to it.
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, the possibility of being contacted immediately provides
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 with a key instrument of uniting people to tackle important social problems.
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, in Ukraine in 2013 there was the so-called Dignity Revolution when a huge number of protestants were able to gather in less than 15 minutes just by making
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 calls to each other.
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 helped them to defend themselves from being beaten by governmental enforcers and was a crucial
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 in the whole revolutionary process. To conclude,
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 calls can be answered anytime these days. While
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 may be a disturbing
factor
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 for one’s
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 and for a
society
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 in general, I believe that it is a
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big importance for reacting to any type of urgency as well as for uniting a
society
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.

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