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in many countries, traditional foods are being replaced by fast food. This has a negative impact on families, individuals and society. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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It is argued that in many countries the
fast
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food
 replaced the traditional
food
 which made a negative impact on families, individual and
society
. I strongly agree that statement, fast
food
 is affecting families, individuals and
society
 in a negative impact. Replacing traditional
food
 with fast
food
 will benefit not only the physical and mental health but
also
 economically. One reason why fast
food
 negatively affects families and individuals is physically and mentally. Today fast
food
 is one of the main causes
for
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 obesity, which is considered a disease in today’s world according to 2020 research. In a result of replacing traditional
food
 with fast
food
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there will be
i
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ncrease
of
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 obesity which leads to individual health issues. An example
for
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that is
 simply people prefer to eat a cheeseburger
instead
 of cooking a healthy meal.
Also
, consuming fast
food
 can affect families mentally. families who cook their
food
 will keep their traditions, sit together and communicate. In
r
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esult of that parents will be able to communicate about their children or spouse. It is known that families who tend to have meals together are
more happy
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 and less depressed. Another side of replacing traditional
food
 with fast
food
 will affect negatively is by hurting the
food
 markets.
In other words
, by buying more fast foods from fast
food
 companies,
food
 markets will struggle without any clients since it’s easier to buy
food
that is
 ready
besides
of
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cooking.
For example
, a big family will prefer to sit in a
fast
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food
 restaurant
besides
 buying groceries at the supermarket and cook.
This
 causes the
food
 markets to lose clients and maybe even lose money
,
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 since they only provide ingredients but not a whole meal. In conclusion
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I am firmly convinced that replacing traditional
food
 with fast
food
 will affect families, individuals and
society
 negatively.
This
 is due to the face that it will increase mental and physical issues for families and individuals,
also
 it will affect
the
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society
 by hurting it economically.
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