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In many countries in the world people buy clothes and choose hair styles according to latest fashion. Why is this happening ? Is this a positive or a negative development?

#countries #world #people #clothes #hair #styles #fashion #development
In the world
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we are
freedom
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 to make
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 elections. The people need to be freedom about
decistions
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decisions
 around their
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lives
life
lifes
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lives
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, one of them is about their
apparience
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appearance
experience
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hair and clothes following the tendency. I consider has
a positive and negative effects
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a positive and negative effect
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. I will argue in the essay some of them. Currently,
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modern society
encourage
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 people to
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 their personalities as much as possible they prefer presenting on daily life according
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fashion model. Particularly, young people do not have any restrictions to performer their lives how they wanted. It is affected on their self -
steem
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esteem
 and confident positively, because they have
takled
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tackled
talked
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tabues
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tables
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 were enforced by traditional thinking.
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, creative communities development activities around
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 common wich spread imagination and sensibility. It
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positive
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society. Despite the fact having different options to
exprees
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express
 our identities trough our style, the
moda
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bussiness
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business
 are been leading by differents economic interested. These
companys
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companies
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ot just find to
made
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 a desirable product, they need to incentivize addiction of purchases trough types of new fashion patterns and campaigns. An
excelent
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that is
 the increase of people who are
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obsessed
obsess
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plastic beauty as well as on expensive brands. It
result
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 in a
prejuditial
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prejudicial
 effect because is a pressing issue
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 was influenced people as
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teenagers and
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children
childrens
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children
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 in different generations. To conclude,
although
 youngers and teenagers people have found in
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atest
relases
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releases
 how a way to
breakthorughts
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breakthroughs
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status
-quo. I
also
 recognise If we have not relative control, it would have a detrimental effect
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 our mental health.
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Because
 are becoming
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victims of fashion. In the future, we should find measures where
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people are not influenced by negatives models of life.
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