Traditions are about the past and innovation is about the future, and it has been argued that we need to let go of traditions for the sake of progress. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this? What role should traditions have in our lives?

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regarded as what occurred in the past, in adverse the
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is thought highly of a great plan in the future. There has been an
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transition to proceed with
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in the future.
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I am inclined to the opposite side of
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argument. We have experienced in the past, live in the present, and have a plan for the future. Sometimes the
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is overlooked as a just happening in the past.
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nnovation is
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occurring
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tradition
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was helpful or not, it brings us invaluable learning because the success can be achieved after numerous failures.
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based on various experience and the brilliant modern science and technology
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been developed over centuries on a basis of well-organized
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cannot be made in a short term and it has been organized throughout trials and errors for
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long time.
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Tradition
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has been preserved by people over years.
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, Korean keep their own
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over a thousand years and Korean people even living in other counties respect for their
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tradition
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. They keep traditional
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such
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as putting on
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unar new year and thanks-giving day.
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bonds
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the people together so strongly and is inherent over generations.
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Tradition
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is thought as a basis of
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. No
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can be derived without
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why we cannot ignore the
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tradition
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in speaking of
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. We should remember the failure is
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other of success.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • heritage
  • continuity
  • progress
  • innovative
  • cultures
  • societal advances
  • integration
  • cultural tapestry
  • ideologies
  • reconciled
  • evolved
  • adapted
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