Traditions are about the past and innovation is about the future, and it has been argued that we need to let go of traditions for the sake of progress. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this? What role should traditions have in our lives?

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Traditions

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regarded as what occurred in the past, in adverse the

innovation

is thought highly of a great plan in the future. There has been an

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we had

rather

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adandon

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transition to proceed with

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in the future.

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I am inclined to the opposite side of

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argument. We have experienced in the past, live in the present, and have a plan for the future. Sometimes the

tradition

is overlooked as a just happening in the past.

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most of

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nnovation is

orginated

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originated

from the

occuring

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occurring

in the past. Whether

tradition

was helpful or not, it brings us invaluable learning because the success can be achieved after numerous failures.

Innovation

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based on various experience and the brilliant modern science and technology

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been developed over centuries on a basis of well-organized

tradition

Tradition

cannot be made in a short term and it has been organized throughout trials and errors for

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long time.

Tradition

has been preserved by people over years.

For instance

, Korean keep their own

tradition

over a thousand years and Korean people even living in other counties respect for their

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. They keep traditional

culture

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such

as putting on

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costumes

customers

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unar new year and thanks-giving day.

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bonds

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the people together so strongly and is inherent over generations.

Tradition

is thought as a basis of

innovation

. No

innovation

can be derived without

tradition

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why we cannot ignore the

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other of success.

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Traditions are about the past and innovation is about the future, and it has been argued that we need to let go of traditions for the sake of progress. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this? What role should traditions have in our lives?

Fully explain your ideas

Buying things on the Internet, such as books, air tickets and groceries, is becoming more and more popular. Do the advantages of shopping in this way outweigh the disadvantages?

Some people think that all university students should study whatever they like. Others believe that they should only be allowed to study subjects that will be useful in the future, such as those related to science and technology.

The plan below show the layout of a university’s sports centre now, and how it will look after redevelopment. summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems as well as practical problems. Do you agree or disagree with this idea?

Some countries are struggling with an increase in the rate of crime. Many people think that having more police on the streets is the only way to reduce crime. To what extent do you agree?