The continued rise in the world's population is the greatest problem faced by the humanity at the present time. What are the causes of this continued rise? Do you agree that it is the greatest problem faced by humanity?

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any more time.

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, we live in nature with few sources of water, food and energy, if we constantly

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not enough for all the

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the food and water war as each country will keep their supplements and will be no more import plus export between countries. In conclusion, the increase in the

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a high-quality life. It is agreed that humanity will face in future many side

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keep constantly

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humanity

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safety and

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