Some people view teenage conflict with their parents as a necessary part of growing up, whilst others seen it as something negative which should be avoided. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Adolescents
collision with their Change noun form
Adolescents'
Adolescent's
fathers
and mothers
is essential while
they grow up. Some folks think it has some drawbacks. There are advantages and disadvantages for
both of the arguments.
Change preposition
to
To begin
with, youngsters rebuild their brain
initial stage. They are learning many new things and Fix the agreement mistake
brains
as a consequence
, there create a huge difference between the parents
and their offsprings
. Teenagers dispute at that time when they are very energetic and optimistic. Fix the agreement mistake
offspring
For example
, going
to school when they spot that there are many unnatural events which they did not face Rephrase
when going
aforetime
they would learn to hinder themselves from Correct your spelling
before
that
illegal Correct determiner usage
those
event
Fix the agreement mistake
events
where
Correct word choice
that
fathers
and mothers
are not aware of
Change preposition
apply
them
. For Correct pronoun usage
apply
this
, the unbalanced system which they learn
previously can lead them to advance in some areas Wrong verb form
learned
where
their Correct word choice
that
parents
do
not Verb problem
are
concern
aboutReplace the word
concerned
Correct pronoun usage
apply
this
.
On the contrary
, fathers
and mothers
are very experienced as they faced teenage oriented
problems in their previous life. Add a hyphen
teenage-oriented
As a result
, it is not useful if juveniles argue with their parents
when they are in the learning stage. For instance
, if a child
addicted Add a verb
child is
child was
in
Change preposition
to
drug
or any harmful substance it is very unsatisfactory news for Fix the agreement mistake
drugs
the
society because their Correct article usage
apply
fathers
and mothers
make huge obstacles evaluating
their matured brains but the Change preposition
in evaluating
over
understanding of adolescents it takes them to a Change preposition
apply
mislead
Replace the word
misleading
paths
. Many children do not get the proper education Fix the agreement mistake
path
that
time Change preposition
at that
incases
of stepping ahead from them. Correct your spelling
in cases
Finally
, it does not provide any benefit to them if they cannot leave combat with their parents
.
In conclusion, youngsters should be sound in their knowledge where
Rephrase
apply
he
Correct pronoun usage
they
needs
to be polite to their Correct subject-verb agreement
need
fathers
and mothers
. Some individuals think it is the best way to abide by their parents
to drive a good output for their better future.Submitted by Sadiq on
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Address the prompt more fully by providing a balanced discussion of both views. Include specific examples and develop your points more fully to demonstrate a deeper understanding of the topic.
Your opinion
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