Some people view teenage conflict with their parents as a necessary part of growing up, whilst others seen it as something negative which should be avoided. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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collision with their

fathers

and

mothers

is essential

while

they grow up. Some folks think it has some drawbacks. There are advantages and disadvantages

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both of the arguments.

To begin

with, youngsters rebuild their

brain

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initial stage. They are learning many new things and

as a consequence

, there create a huge difference between the

parents

and their

offsprings

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. Teenagers dispute at that time when they are very energetic and optimistic.

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,

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when going

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to school when they spot that there are many unnatural events which they did not face

aforetime

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before

they would learn to hinder themselves from

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illegal

event

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where

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fathers

and

mothers

are not aware

of

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them

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. For

this

, the unbalanced system which they

learn

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previously can lead them to advance in some areas

where

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their

parents

do

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not

concern

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about

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this

.

On the contrary

,

fathers

and

mothers

are very experienced as they faced

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problems in their previous life.

As a result

, it is not useful if juveniles argue with their

parents

when they are in the learning stage.

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, if a

child

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addicted

in

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drug

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drugs

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or any harmful substance it is very unsatisfactory news for

the

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society because their

fathers

and

mothers

make huge obstacles

evaluating

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their matured brains but the

over

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understanding of adolescents it takes them to a

mislead

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paths

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. Many children do not get the proper education

that

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at that

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time

incases

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of stepping ahead from them.

Finally

, it does not provide any benefit to them if they cannot leave combat with their

parents

. In conclusion, youngsters should be sound in their knowledge

where

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he

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needs

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to be polite to their

fathers

and

mothers

. Some individuals think it is the best way to abide by their

parents

to drive a good output for their better future.