Most people pay taxes to contribute to the development of their country, however, some think they have other responsibilities rather than paying taxes. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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of individuals and organizations who are contributing their
money
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overnment’s budget through paying taxes. It is often argued that
this
is a positive way to strengthen country whilst others disagree and think that the
money
should be spent
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other purposes. These ideas will be discussed in
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essay. It is
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that the
money
that governments get from the taxes are the main source to run their systems.
Moreover
, it is not only used to upgrade infrastructures
such
as electricity, road, school…but
also
spent on new technology in industry and
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agriculture
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itizen’s duty to make the whole economy wealthier and wealthier. For
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nstant, in many developed countries when you get a job, your employer will automatically help you tax by subtracting
money
from your salary.
However
, many feel uncomfortable to put aside some
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of their profits for tariff, they think
that is
their own
money
, authorities do not help them in making it. They want to invest
further
or upgrade manufacture. What would happen if individualism tends to increase. There would be no total
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developed fields in every country.
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, in a country where no one or company pay for tax, so how can they find the fund for building basic infrastructure In conclusion, while the benefits of taxing
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particularly the modern equipment that
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people to have
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etter living standard, good opportunities for business. Some still feel not be satisfied with
this
point, yet it is better for the whole development.
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