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In spite of the advances made in agriculture, many people around the world still go hungry. Why is this case? What can be done about this problem?

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Despite the advances in
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griculture industry ,many people are unable to fill their stomach.The saying "Rich are becoming
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richer whereas poor are becoming
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" is valid.
This
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discuss
 the reason and the solution for the given problem. There are two reasons why people are still hungry.
Firstly
,Transportation of food from the production location to the consumer location, adds additional price to the food product.
For instance
, rice produced cost to just Rs.10 by the time it is
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delivered
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onsumer it is Rs.20, consumers with lower income find it difficult to afford to buy with
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 high price.
Secondly
, due to climate change
such
 as drought or
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heavy
 rainfall could make people starve and
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 loss of life due to debt
inccured
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incurred
 by drought or heavy rainfall. The solution to the problems is government should subsidize the fuel
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 so that additional cost during transportation will be reduced and
also
 the government should provide loans to farmers with low interest, so that can grow more crops with more freedom and less fear.
Government
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 should waive the loan in case of drought since farmers are considered
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backbone
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 of the country,
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moreover
 the country economic will be impacted by the production of goods .
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roduction of food is directly
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proportional
 to the
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government
 policies and
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rules for
rules
 the farmers.Rules made in
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 of farmers will help the country to grow to
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ertain extent .
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farmers should be aware of the
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benefits
 provided by the government so that they can implement.
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Structure your answers in logical paragraphs

The easiest way to score well on the IELTS Task 2 writing portion is to structure your writing in a solid essay format.

A strong argument essay structure can be split up into 4 paragraphs, each containing 4 sentences (except the conclusion paragraph, which only contains 3 sentences).

Stick to this essay structure:

  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • inequality
  • distribution
  • access to resources
  • climate change
  • natural disasters
  • political factors
  • economic factors
  • agricultural practices
  • infrastructure
  • transportation
  • population growth
  • education
  • knowledge
  • food waste
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