"Prevention is better than cure." Out of a country's health budget, a large proportion should be diverted from treatment to spending on health education and preventative measures. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
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people
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about
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diseases
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people
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disease
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the disadvantages
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government
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this
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Also
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government
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also
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diseases
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diseases
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life-threatening
diseases
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such
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hence
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such
gruesome Linking Words
diseases
. Use synonyms
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government
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