Global warming is one of the biggest threats humans face in the 21st Century and sea levels are continuing to rise at alarming rates. What problems are associated with this and what are some possible solutions.

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IN the contemporary context, it is inevitable to be heard about
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iscussion of weather and climate changes, as well as the global warming effects that human beings are coping with. In
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iscussion on issues related to global warming and
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onsequence of sea rising
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problem. Later, there will be some solutions for these questions. One of the major problems of global warming is environmental destruction. The increasing temperature
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linking with the forest fires in many parts of the world.
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ew years ago in the hottest summer recorded in Vietnam, the temperature rose up to nearly 50 Celsius degrees. While all Vietnamese people in the north were experiencing the highest heat in the history for many days, the U Minh forest in the south blazed up suddenly.
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, many trees were burnt completely and huge of animals lost their habitat, which leads to
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mbalance of biodiversity.
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global warming
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. High
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of temperature makes ice in the Antarctica and Artic easy to melt. In
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alarming speed. Flood is unavoidable to take place in many countries throughout the world. To be more specific, in
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entre of Vietnam as well as in the Philippines, people have witnessed 2 successive floods. It was reported that a lot of people were starved and homeless after the flood. Plenty of property
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damaged and some lives disappeared for no reason. The state of these two countries had to spend a large proportion of national budget compensating for
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areas. To address
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problem, every country in the world need to join hands to reduce pollution resulting in global warming. The government encourages its citizens to use public transportation to their office
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of their own cars. In
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, in Vietnam, the government has set up a public service company of express buses and call for every Vietnamese people to take advantage of it.
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increases the price of petrol in order to lower the number of
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rivate vehicle on the road. Apart from the effort of the government, individuals have to play an important part in alleviating global warming. People should grow more trees and plants and take care of forests. And illegal hunters and loggers will be put into prison to set
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xample of other people against the law. In the conclusion, global warming is a serious problem these days. The resulting rise in sea
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can bring about several disasters.
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