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What goals do you have for yourself, including both personal and professionals goals?

#goals #professionals
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 is like a ship which roams around the ocean but never able to anchor to the coast. I have both
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ersonal and professional goal for myself. Personally, I would like
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be a happy, healthy and inner peaceful individual.
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, professionally, I want to achieve the
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chief
 Information technology officer position in a multinational organization. Being happy in
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ost difficult situation in
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 is one of the most important parts
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. Almost every one of us
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uture is unknown and past cannot be changed and yet we mull over these and become anxious and depressed about
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 Norman Vincent Peale wrote in his best selling book "The Power of Positive Thinking" that a positive mind in any
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situation
 can overcome the complexity of
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, it is a mountain task to be positive in every
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situation
 in
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. To
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achieve
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juggernaut
 task, people can have
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gratitude
 journal, have daily positive
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affirmation
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, or can do meditation. Study
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 shown that individuals who do daily meditation have more strength to avoid negative thoughts. It is almost
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obvious
 that to achieve the highest success in
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 people have to work hard as well as they need a
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 mind. All the big bosses in the corporate world have these two things are common.
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, Jeff Bezos, he wakes up at 5am in the morning and the
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iscipline lifestyle and work smart in my area of expertise. I personally believe that every person can be successful if they have inner happiness. In
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conclusion
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, aims are essential parts
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life
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 and in my
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I want to have success in personal and professional
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. As a person
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I want to grow happiness inside and in work I want to
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achieve
 the
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highest
 position in my area of expertise.
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