Some people think that studying history is a waste of time while others think it is essential to learn history. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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Nowadays more people pay attention to learn science subject.Some people believe that
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time-wasting,while others
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that it is important to learn
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. I will discuss both sides.
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echnology era, that's why teenagers choose ology rather than
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. Technical subjects are demanded in
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odern century.In my opinion, everybody might know
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istory of their motherland,of the place where they born and grew. It is true that young generations
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not interest in historical faculties.
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it is clear that
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ssential role in our lives.
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, if you are studying or working abroad,you have a chance to present your native country,so without knowledge
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you cannot do that. Especially,if you are from
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mall,unknown country it is the best way to make your homeland,your culture is known for everyone. To summarize to learn
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is imperative of every citizen,so we need to study
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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