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Nowadays many people work from home. Some think it is beneficial, while others think it may distract the family routine. What is your opinion.

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From the ancient era individual have to struggle just to earn money and feed their family and meet their basics need by the passage of stage task and its patters get changes as modernisation and revolutions in a particular field has been changed. Fifty years ahead nobody would have thought about performance from
home
 but today its exist and many of workers working their jobs from
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ouse they are mostly those workers or employees whose
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 is based on
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nternet .Due to
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 pandemic situation surplus
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people are working from their
home
. There are many advantages of working from
home
,
firstly
 you are solely responsible for your
work
 as nobody watch on you its all depend upon that worker how fast they have to complete their
work
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no limitation of time in fact
person
 has to fix his own time to complete the task.
Third
 can look after to family too if the working
person
 is wemon .Fourth not wastage of time and money in transport. Some disadvantages are too for working from
home
 is,
first
 there is no routine of your
work
 means you have to
work
 whenever
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erson get times to production
secondly
 it required electronic gadgets which ultimately needs a power supply.by whose
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deficient project
person
 would not struggle at all. in my conclusion
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 must say working from
home
 is best and it should be promoted it is more useful to keep
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erson to
person
 social distancing in
this
 fatal pandemic situation and where ever condition is there which is insurmountable
this
 the best solution to earn money and spend or life .
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