Write about the following topic: In Britain, when someone gets old they often go to live in a home with other old people where there are nurses to look after them. Sometimes the government has to pay for this care. Who do you think should pay for this care, the government or the family? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

While

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opulation has soared, birth rates are

continuosly

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continuously

decreasing in most of the well-developed world.

As a result

,

overageing

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averaging

over ageing

is one

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the main problems that many countries are facing. As the number of elders

need

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services to

care

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them, families and individuals should be

responsibles

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responsible

for them, but if someone

does not have neither

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does not have either

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family

or

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money

,

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overnment should pay.

Government

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The government

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should invest

money

on other services rather than pay for expenses of people on their

retirement

. The state should able to guarantee common services by reaching the maximum number of persons in the population.

For instance

, it has more positive outcomes if

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overnment spend

money

on better public infrastructure

such

as roads and transportation than

care

for old people. The investment is going to bring profit in the mid-term by fueling the economical growth.

As a result

, individuals and as a consequence

families

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family

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will be able to have more

money

to spend and they can freely choose

wheter

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whether

they save for

retirement

or if they want to pay for caring of the older family group members.

Nevertheless

, opportunities are not the same for everyone. Some people have better access to resources

such

as networking and education and they can easily save for their

retirement

.

On the other hand

, some people have worked their entire

life

only

for

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to

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thrive and survive and they were not able to save for later stages of

life

.

As a result

,

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overnment should spend

money

on basic infrastructure and

care

for elders who were working their entire

life

but they were not able to save

money

for

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their own. One

succesful

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successful

example of

this

policy is Australia where the

government

is spending

money

on services for their old

tax payers

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but in the same time

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private

elder

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eldercare

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care

is offering in all over the country for individuals and families who were saving and want to spend on it. In conclusion,

overageing

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averaging

over ageing

is becoming one of the

challeging

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challenging

problems in our societies and families and individuals need to be aware of

this

problem and be ready to solve it, but

also

government

should be present whenever someone is not able to pay for

care

because there are persons who have been working their entire

life

and they have not allowed

to save

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for their

retirement

.