Write about the following topic: In many countries, international tourism has become an important source of income. However, it also has negative effects. Do the benefits of international tourism outweigh the disadvantages? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.

There are many nations in the world become wealthier because of the profits of

the

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international

tourism

and yet,

this

is eventually the main income of those nations.

Nevertheless

, there are some drawbacks of

this

kind of livelihood corresponding to the other sectors of the economy of a country

such

as

agriculture

, or even domestic

tourism

. Despite

of

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the negative impacts, it has either several extraordinary benefits

outwieghing

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outweighing

the drawbacks. I would like

to begin

with the

apparently

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disadvantage

on

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domestic

tourism

. I am concerned that

this

kind of economic sector will be

underminded

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undermined

.

In addition

, the

agriculture

would be partly affected,

in other words

, if people see working on

travelism

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travels

travel

could help their livelihood more than doing

agriculture

,

then

people would be less and less willing to do

agriculture

.

However

, these issues could be compromised by the significant advantages of

the

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worldly

tourism

.

Firstly

,

this

could satisfy the demand

of

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occupations in local areas. It would encourage the locals to develop their skills, their insight to communicate with

the

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travelers

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travellers

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.

Moreover

,

this

also

aids more changes for the nations to promote their traditions, their

specialties

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specialities

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, their features,

hence

, they may gain significant reputations from other nations.

For example

, Thai Land is a well-known developed nation by 70 per cent of

their

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GDP depends on the international sectors.

Therefore

, the more profit it brings, the more

capability

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of the nations have in other to solve the problems relating to

agriculture

and so forth. In conclusion, there are some disadvantages of developing

the

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international

tourism

,

however

, these advantages could overweigh these drawbacks.