Some people think that a sense of competition in children should be encouraged. Others believe that children who are taught to co-operate rather than compete become more useful adults. Discuss both views and give your opinion

Almost every day of the week, you can read stories about encouraging children in the rivalry in newspapers. In fact,

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issue has aroused much controversy among parents and people working in

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ducational environment. Some people reckon that

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ompetitive environment is lucrative to the pupils;

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, others have debated the idea that

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ducational system should concentrate on collaboration.

Therefore

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essay both controversial sides of

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argument are going to be discussed. On the one hand, some people opine that children have to

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up in competitive surrounding due to the evidence that

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the process of learning paramount skills. They are stimulated to work harder to acquire knowledge during school. In matter, competitiveness leads them

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ttain a high level of achievement.

As a result

, their path work will be splendid.

For instance

, a child who has gained a vast majority academic achievements,

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, praised by teachers, and

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will have a senesce of satisfaction,

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have an opportunity to enrol in one of the best universities all around the world.

On the other hand

, some people believe, it is plain that pupils co-operate in different activities during their educational period, owing to the fact acquiring moral traits, like empathy and teamwork which leads learning from others, and

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enhance previous knowledge or skills. Indeed, by taking a part in

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, everyone works together to achieve a specific goal, they would be able to learn from their peers,

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, will be

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seful adult into society. According to

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recent research conducted by

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niversity of Tehran,

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tudent who study in a group, are more motivated,

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they support each other which improve their social behaviour. In the final analysis, I personally go along with the idea that

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we have to make a healthy balance between competing and co-operating.

As a result

, people with beneficial skills would be contributed to the world.