You have recently flown to another country on a business trip. You were satisfied with the flight, but didn’t like services at the airport. Write a letter to the airport manager and say Give your flight details. Why were you disappointed? Suggest some improvements to the airport services.

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Dear Sir, Hope you are doing well. I am writing

this

letter to express my dissatisfaction

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my recent experience at the

airport

. My name is Madhu Jadhav, and I

traveled

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from India to South Africa through Jet Airways on October 16,

2020

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at 6 PM.

Flight

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The flight

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number was 34KJ2K and my boarding pass number was UTYRCS6U. Though I was happy with the flight, unfortunately, I was disappointed by the

airport

services. There were not enough employees to serve

travelers

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, the quality of customer service was very poor. The

airport

workers were unable to answer our questions about the process of online

check

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, or deal with minor requests,

such

as informing tourists about locations of restrooms and stores. Another issue that we struggled

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the slow internet connection with intermittent

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. Considering the problems we encountered, I would like to suggest some possible solutions. Hiring more staff, and giving them training on everything they need to know about the

airport

, and

also

how to treat customers in a courteous way. With regard to

internet

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connection, I would recommend a more reliable internet provider. Thank you for taking

time

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to read my letter, and I hope

this

information helps improve

airport

services in the nearest future. Yours faithfully, Madhu Jadhav

Submitted by madhuranijadhav on Sun Nov 15 2020

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