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Computers becoming essential part of school lessons. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages and give your own opinion.

#computers #part #school #lessons
Nowadays, the information age has highly necessary had computers to
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communicate
. There are many people
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elieve that it is an important tool in the
school
. I consider
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 important to have
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technological
 resources in education times. The essay will discuss
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advantages
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disadvantages and provide my opinion when is necessary. Currently, some people consider the
use
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technological
 devices as
a computers
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a computer
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 is likely to be some
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 harmful effects
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becoming
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ddiction to social networking or games.
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ncrease in young people and children allow to spent a
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 amount of time in front of computers or tv it has a detrimental consequence in terms of
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 a sedentary life and diseases
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 obesity.
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, children addictive
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social networks being
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stunned
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 socially. Many social
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researchers
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 consider that
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promote
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 the
use
 of computers in the
school
. Despite the fact
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having addictive
tennegears
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teenagers
, there are good reasons to continue promoting the
use
 of
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technological
 devices
such
a computers
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computers
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 in the
school
. One of them, the used it has been
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 by the world because as soon as
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possible
 when started the academic life or job life you will need to manage different
tecnological
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technological
 resources to proper
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communication
. Another potential reason is if you learn to manage different software, design programs, even send proper emails, it would become a modern student.
For example
, some
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teenagers
 are using
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nternet each one need do an
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assignment
assessment
 and they are able to transform the data and information in graphics and
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summarize
summarized
 them
that is
 why the computers are becoming essential in
this
 process. In
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conclusion
,
although
 some people consider the
use
 of
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omputer is a disadvantage in terms of promoting
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edentary lifestyle, It is particularly
signficant
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significant
 that how the
use
 of computers are academic develop on
school
 years because it allows
to be
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 an excellent professional for the future. Based
in
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 my knowledge, the computers in the modern
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society
 is
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ubiquitous
that is
 why children
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tennagers
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teenagers
 should learn to
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 from the
first
 ages of studies.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Edutainment
  • Multimedia resources
  • E-learning platforms
  • Digital literacy
  • Cyberbullying
  • Ergonomic hazards
  • Cognitive overload
  • Technological proficiency
  • Blended learning environments
  • Instructional technology
  • Adaptive software
  • Screen time management
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