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Some people think individuals are more and more dependent on each other. Some people think individuals are more and more independent. Discuss and give your opinion.

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The society is a giant network that links every individual through various ways, including economy, Internet and direct communications. As the lifestyle of the present days
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 changed, the dependency among individuals differs
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 the past as well. We could argue that individuals are more reliant on each other when we look at the
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 of interaction and the current economic pattern. Because of the development and the
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nternet, social media especially, communicating with friends or family members via texting is far from inconvenient.
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ocial network is more practical nowadays comparing with the days without
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nternet.
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igher level of dependency is unavoidable. To achieve maximum profit, firms in one area would be specialised to produce one or several products only, which could benefit from economies of scales.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • interconnected
  • globalization
  • remote work
  • independence
  • dependency
  • specialization
  • professional services
  • social validation
  • individualism
  • self-reliance
  • collective action
  • sustainability
  • global community
  • navigating
  • complexity
  • environmental movement
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