You have decided to leave your current employment. Write a letter to your employer. Include the following in your letter: Explain why you are writing Explain why you have decided to leave the company Tell your employer what you plan to do after leaving your present employment

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Dear Sir, I am writing

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letter in relation

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my resignation that I had submitted yesterday through the

office

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portal. As per the office regulations, the notice period will be sixty working days and according to that my

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working day falls on 30th December. I had been working in

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firm as a consultant

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past

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3 years. But for a career

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I have decided to pursue M.B.A. Sometime back, I had applied

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well renowned

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business school in my city and

fortunately

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my application was accepted. I have taken

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decision after meticulous consideration of its pros and cons. After completing my masters, I would like to either go abroad for working in a foreign country or apply

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a firm

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a higher role in an organization near my hometown. I would definitely reach you for any guidance. I hope you would be glad to see me

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a settled position.

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want to thank you for the overwhelming support and the valuable experience that you have provided me through the company. Thanking you, Yours sincerely, Madhu

madhuranijadhavMon Nov 16 2020

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

186 words

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