Some people say that the best way to improve public health is by increasing the number of sports facilities. Others, however, say that this would have little effect on public health and that other measures are required. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

It seems to be an increasingly

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concern about public

health

. Some people argue that raising the number of

sport

equitments

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equipment

can help to remedy

this

situation.

However

, I believe that

this

may not be insufficient. Some of the major culprits of

this

problem will be discussed before other measures are drawn. The lack of

sport

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facilities is one of the

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of reasons that they want to cover for

their

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big problem

that is

not come from outside but from themselves

such

as poor cognitive about the importance of

exercise

or the impatient in the process of improving their

health

.

For instance

, to some workers who spend a large amount of time in working don’t realize that

exercise

can affect their brain , their

health

, their energy for good

instead

of just falling asleep intermediately or don’t do anything.

Besides

, some people who need to lose weight think that fasting will be faster than

exercise

without regard to

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fast

will negatively affect their

health

. Or some go to the gym but give up after a few days just because they can’t see the direct efficiency at the moment.

Therefore

, if the absence of

equipments

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is not

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ajor impact

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current

health

problems Obviously , measures are totally required. The problem of perception is not new but never old and we can’t solve it one at once. But we can enhance it gradually by realistic solutions as posting information about the benefits and harms of

exercise

on social media or television news, educating the young generation about it as well.

Additionally

, it’s difficult to stick with your progress or struggle with getting disciplined. That’s why you need mentors or what we call accountability partners to build the discipline. If you want to work out at

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ym it’s might be hard for you to go there by yourself but if you have a training partner who is intrinsically motivated to be disciplined

then

you can workout and push each other together.Apparently, there is no simple solution To sum up , I assume that increasing number of

sport

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facilities is not really effective , it’s necessary to take any action from anyone to change our daily habits day by day rather than blame for the weakness of

sport

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facilities.