Men should go to work and women place is in the home. To what extend do you agree or disagree

In
this
modern era, the
world
is changing a lot as compared to the past and
this
is only because of the men and women's same effort. Some people believe that men must have to
work
outside to
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handle
the
finincial
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financial
situation and women have to live in the house. But I personally think that
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equal right and freedom.
This
essay will discuss why ladies
also
have to go outside for
work
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instead
of living at home.
Moreover
, from
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ast few decades
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ladies contribution is more in development than men.
Firstly
, if they go outside and study or
work
then
this
thing will increase their awareness about the
world
and they can't manipulate by anyone easily.
Secondly
,
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ation's economy will gradually increase by
this
.
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orld's many
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only developed because they
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their all their people to
work
without any gender difference. Mainly, if
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nly mal
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to
work
then
it will
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disturb
the hall system. So, the government
also
have to motivate
femals
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females
not to live in the house only.
However
, many
femals
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females
female
are facing
domesting
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domestic
vilonce
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violence
because they are living only in their nest and not aware of their rights. Apart from
this
, most of the innovations are done by
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girls
as compared to the boys in
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human history.
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create
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a peaceful
world
ladies have to go out from their own shell. To conclude, as per the some human's mentality only gents have to go out for job and ladies have to stay at home and I have fully
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with it. Because it is not beneficial for the society as well as for the country.
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