Some people think the government should increase the cost of fuel for cars and other vehicles in order to solve environmental problems. To what extent do you agree?

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Fuel sources are the principal producers of CO2 particles which are potentially harmful
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the atmosphere. For
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reason, many people believe that the authorities have to
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sources as
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ransportation mode, or other uses in order to reduce the
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in the planet. I entirely agree with
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view because I believe that citizens have the responsibility to care
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their planet and
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reduce their footprint of CO2. Everybody
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concerned
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the effects of the used of toxic fuels as a mode of transportation.
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people continue to buy car
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ngine's car burned the fuel which
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from toxic chemicals
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as coal, oil, and gas.
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particles travel for the atmosphere generating air pollution and green-houses. Both processes involve several
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for human's health, the quality of the air, and ecosystem welfare. Indeed, the World Health Organization has declared that the substantial increase in respiratory illnesses
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as Asthma,
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cancer has a strong connection with the
industralization
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industrialization
of cities in the
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decades.
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the construction of factories and the financial improvements on people's lives has
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deteriorating
the air quality every year. Nowadays, the majority of the population have the possibility to
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more than 2 car per family.
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, it is correct and fair that these people pay an extra cost for the effects of their decisions. The funds collected with
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measure can be used for helping people who suffered asthma or
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in different non-profit environment organisation which protect animals, plants, and sources. In conclusion, it is crucial that humankind understands the
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of any decision that brings in their daily activities because a simple preference of transportation can
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in long-term severe effects our habitat and wellbeing.
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