Some people think the government should increase the cost of fuel for cars and other vehicles in order to solve environmental problems. To what extent do you agree?

Fuel sources are the principal producers of CO2 particles which are potentially harmful

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the atmosphere. For

this

reason, many people believe that the authorities have to

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taxes in the used of

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sources as

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ransportation mode, or other uses in order to reduce the

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consequences

in the planet. I entirely agree with

this

view because I believe that citizens have the responsibility to care

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their planet and

also

reduce their footprint of CO2. Everybody

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concerned

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the effects of the used of toxic fuels as a mode of transportation.

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people continue to buy car

although

they know that

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ngine's car burned the fuel which

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from toxic chemicals

such

as coal, oil, and gas.

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,

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particles travel for the atmosphere generating air pollution and green-houses. Both processes involve several

consenquences

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consequences

for human's health, the quality of the air, and ecosystem welfare. Indeed, the World Health Organization has declared that the substantial increase in respiratory illnesses

such

as Asthma,

alergies

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allergies

, and

throath's

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throat's

throats

cancer has a strong connection with the

industralization

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industrialization

of cities in the

last

decades.

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the construction of factories and the financial improvements on people's lives has

deterioring

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deteriorating

the air quality every year. Nowadays, the majority of the population have the possibility to

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more than 2 car per family.

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, it is correct and fair that these people pay an extra cost for the effects of their decisions. The funds collected with

this

measure can be used for helping people who suffered asthma or

also

could

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in different non-profit environment organisation which protect animals, plants, and sources. In conclusion, it is crucial that humankind understands the

consenquences

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of any decision that brings in their daily activities because a simple preference of transportation can

produces

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in long-term severe effects our habitat and wellbeing.