It is important to lean the difference between right and wrong at an early age. Punishment is necessary to help them learn this distinction. to what extend do you agree and disagree with this opinion? what sort of punishment should parents and teachers be allowed to use to teach good behavior to children?

Some people believe that children should be taught the distinction between right and wrong at an early age and it is crucial for adults to punish them as a way of helping them learn
this
difference. From my point of view, I totally agree with
this
assumption for some reasons that are detailed in
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essay. One of the r
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why we should punish children when they do something wrong is to make them aware of their wrong behaviour. When they are punished they will realize that their act is unacceptable and
this
will deter them from repeating the same offence.
Therefore
, when they go to school, they can behave well and make their school life free of problems. When they grow up and become adults, they will stay away from wrong acts thanks to the lessons they learned from childhood.
For example
, a child is punished for bullying his
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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