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It is better for children to grow up in the countryside than in a big city. Do you agree or disagree?

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Many believe suburban areas are ideal to raise families to compare to urban cities. I utterly agree with
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, many countryside housing areas have big outdoor spaces and public parks facilities, where children can play. Kids have more space to ride their bikes and play with friends. Parents can
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 feel comfortable sending their offsprings outdoors as these areas are much safer from fast cars.
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, in suburbs, people live in a community where everyone is familiar with each other.
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 contributes to children safety from unknown predators.
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, in small communities, people are familiar and friendly with each other, and elders in the community during there free time can supervise kids playing on the street,
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 making it safe for children playing outdoors. If they spot any suspicious person they can immediately notify their parents.
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, working parents can leave their children at home, because their neighbours can take care of them in there absent.
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, Kids can grow up in bigger houses compare to cities where maximum people can afford is flat.
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, a family of six, in suburbs parents have the opportunity to provide separates rooms to each of their children.
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 there might be some facilities like good schools which might not be available in many towns,
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 trend has been changing since the past few years. Many governments have invested in better schools in towns to provide better education. To conclude, as the aforementioned reasons, I believe it is better to raise children in towns
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 to big cities.
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