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Some people consider thinking about and planning for the future to be a waste of time. They argue that people should live in the moment. Do you agree or disagree

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It is considered by many people that thinking about the future is a
time wasting
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 activity
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 they should focus on
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resent and worry about upcoming time. I absolutely disagree with
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 notion and believe that planning ahead is always better in order to reap the benefits in the long run. The main reason why planning in advance is beneficial is that it ensures successful completion of the ventures that too with profits.
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, if there are proper strategies planned for a certain task, the person would be able to assess the pros and cons for a specific course of action and can take corrective measures well before the actual situation arises.
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, if an individual makes a budget for his upcoming month by calculating the expenses which he may incur and manage the salary
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, he may not encounter
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hortage of funds ever.
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 may not be the case if an individual takes his decisions impulsively and not beforehand.
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, thinking about the future is a mindful decision that everyone should take. Admittedly, the people who pre-consider their actions are less likely to encounter downfalls. To be more precise, these people invest their time, energy and funds after thorough analysis and
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, chances of failure are lesser. If someone wants to open a retail shop,
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deep market research and anticipating the turnover would help him to take decision
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 may result
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the investment to go in vain if not performed meticulously.
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, for all the walks of
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, having futuristic approach is helpful. In conclusion, people do want to lead a
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life
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 where they do not worry about
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uture
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. but not doing they may lead a
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 full of
uncertainities
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uncertainties
. While, with just a bit of planning, a secured
life
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 can be assured.
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