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Universities should accept equal number of male and female students in every subject. To what extend do you agree or disagree

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Sex discrimination has been a ubiquitous issue throughout the past centuries though in the modern era egalitarianism is followed. Despite
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the sex, institutes register students but it generates the question whether it favours the idea of providing equal right or will it deviates student’s ability to understand their capabilities.
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 society immensely believes that men and women should get equal opportunities. Almost all the universities in the
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 students in various educational programs excluding their gender
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 manifest that women are not less to men, they have the same right as all citizens under the sex discrimination act.
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, they acquire the same level of potential, capability and intellectual ability as men, as an illustration
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there are many female entrepreneurs who are successful idols in the contemporary business
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. Despite the ability to success females face many obstacles throughout their lives.
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, there are many physically strenuous jobs
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 as cardiovascular surgeons and civil engineers, where hundred
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 involvement and long working hours are required, which would be impossible for a woman since she has to dedicate time for household work and child-rearing.
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, if female students tend to choose these subjects to study as a foundation for their career pathways they will find it hard to cooperate in the future. To conclude, in the current
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 there are ample of opportunities for males and females even in regard to education. Higher studies institutions should
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ame number of boys and girls for all the academic programs. In spite, students should be acknowledged about their career paths before they proceed that subject
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 their future will not be misguided
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 could aid them to achieve futuristic academic and career prospects.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • gender equality
  • diversity
  • inclusivity
  • balanced
  • learning environment
  • opportunities
  • perspectives
  • gender stereotypes
  • fairness
  • equal opportunities
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