Write a letter to invite an English-speaking friend to watch a movie with you about your country. In your letter: Include some background about the film Explain why it might interest him/her Suggest arrangements for watching the film

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Dear Mike, How are you doing? We didn’t go out for ages. That’s why I am writing to suggest you accompany me
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Friday and go to watch a historical movie about Kazakhstan. The picture recreates events of my country at the times of the Mongol empire and is called “Mongol”. An interesting fact about the movie is that the creators of the film have specially built a fort
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to the Ili river for the shoot. I remember that you are keen on historical movies and ancient architecture. That’s why I am sure you will enjoy it. Watching the movie will be conducted
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17 to 19 p.m
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Friday at Bekmambetov cinema. If you agree to come along with me, I will pick you up at 16.30 and we will be just in time at the cinema. I hope you will be able to join me. I am looking forward to your earliest answer. Take care, Maria
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

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