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Education in financial management should be a mandatory component of the school program. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give reasons for your answer and include examples from your experience.

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Nowadays
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orld is changing unbearably fast. Within
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there are new devices created to make people lives easier. To do that they have to utilize minerals, restructure them and transport. For most of those actions
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there are fuels needed. But will
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of
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the costs of fuels help with solving environmental problems? Rising the cost of fuel will not
effect
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affect
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 on
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nvironment
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 but on
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conomics of particular countries. The rich ones will be able to provide themselves
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the
amound
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amount
 of
fules
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files
fuels
 they need despite the price.
Besides
, it would be better to spend that money on investing in renewable energy.
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they would crate campaigns that raise awareness among people.
Secondly
 poorer countries would find themselves in
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xtremely difficult position. They would stop buying
fules
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files
fuels
, but it would not change their environmental problems. They still would not invest in renewable energy, because of its high price, what is more, they would search for
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heapest ways of utilizing minerals. It would only come with even worst impact on
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nvironment. It leads us to
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onclusion that
instead
 of increasing a price people should invest in renewable energy. To make
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hightly
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highly
 developed countries should help those, who need it.
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 way to change the world we live in is to change the point of view
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