Topic: In the future it may be necessary for us to live on another planets. For this reason, some people believe that we should spend money now researching planets that could be a possible home, such as Mars. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
An overwhelming number of people consider that humanity should invest an amount of money in
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research to find new planets for their future living now. I completely agree with this
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lobal warming issue.
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various type of researchers about other planets is that scientists can discover new types of fossil fuels. Remove the article
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In other words
, it is no secret that human beings are continue
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as oil, gas, coal to produce the energy to satisfy consumer’s needs, forgetting that raw materials are unrenewable. As a result
, governments should invest money to space
exploration to find new planets and as a consequence new types of natural resources. The best example that illustrates this
issue is that according to new researches of Yale University in 2019, the amount of raw materials is left for the nearest 100 years and scientists concluded that the need of researching new types of energy or establish methods how to deliver minerals from other planets.
Another reason why people should spend their money in
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researching is the problem of global warming. In other words
, with human’s activity, the average temperature is increasing by 0.7 degrees in each year which means the growing number of hurricanes, floods, draughts which destroy the wildlife and as result doing the life of humanity is impossible on the planet. For instance
, the catastrophe of Fukucima
-1 in Japan in 2011 killed a variety number of people and animals, making the place of alienation and beyond unsuitable for life and called tsunami in the nearest cities, destroyed the flora and fauna as well as the infrastructure of people and called the new growth of temperature for the nearest 25 years. Specialists concluded that if people continue to do their activity without caring about Correct your spelling
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to move to another planet in the nearest future.
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exploration to find new planets to live in the future due to the unavailability of fossil fuels and the threat of destroying the wildlife by global warming.Submitted by Nataliia Litovchenko on
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite