There are many people who go to live in different countries. To what extent should people be allowed to move freely between countries and live where they choose? What are the benefits and drawbacks of this? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

In the current era of globalization

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more people tend to migrate to the places where appropriate living standards are maintained. Even though it can be negative in terms of cultural, environmental, and economic perspectives, I personally believe that international migration has many positive effects. On the one hand, an increasing number of

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orking population generates additional tax revenue for the economy, which

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can be invested into social benefits and infrastructure of the country.

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, it’s extremely beneficial for the local community in terms of creating more employment opportunities, experience in international business and communication.

For instance

, Dubai is the best example of a place developed with the enormous help of worldwide investment and migration of highly professional staff from developed countries.

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, due to

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tendency, the majority of developing countries experience the so-called “brain - drain”, which means that the largest portion of newcomers

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mainly educated and working young people who are motivated to search for better conditions for life and job opportunities in other countries. In Canada,

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, the rate of immigration is accelerating due to

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policy to attract professionals from all over the world.

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, it means that those countries left by emigrants will lack in

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population.

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, countries accepting more newcoming population can suffer from pollution, lack of natural resources and subsequent environmental issues related to the overpopulation. In conclusion, considering relocation to other places requires detailed analysis as it can result not only in higher standards of living, competitive income for international and local

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but

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in some inappropriate consequences for the economy and the environment.